Wednesday, November 25, 2009

The Quiet Girl



Being the quiet girl in my school is very audacious, because everyone is always talkative and ready for anything. You would have known because you are probably the popular one, but if you where the quiet one, you would know exactly what I'm talking about.




The day I started school I have always been the quiet one, there has never been one school that I have gone to where I haven't been quiet. Being the quiet one is a huge problem for me, because I just feel that I can't fit in. Every time the school does anything, or the popular people all talk about "cool" stuff, but I am just the lackadaisical person standing in the corner, and walking by myself down the hall.




Being the quiet one is also requires taking big risk that you don't understand. In my school I show mutiny and great respect for my teachers and friends, but others work their way different. What I wonder is how do they treat their friends, family, and themselves.




Someday I just want to put this all behind and be a normal person, but still control myself and be conscientious with the friends I choose. Tomorrow will be a new day, a chance for me to be a new person, have new friends, and a new life.


I entered the new school day serene, showing no interest for attention. I was ready to be a new person, and I walked in like slut. I wish I had never done that, I had done this slovenly, having no respect for myself. The next you know is you alone in the dark, naked.

4 comments:

  1. Your story is good, filled with teen aged angst.

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  2. Read, correct and then deleate my post.

    please make these corrections- Keep your story, just remove these words from where you have them and try to insert them correctly, or use different words. Please read the sentences in the WW book to see how the words are used.

    Thanks!

    audacious

    lackadaisical

    slovenly

    mutiny

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  3. Wow! Nice storyy, you should put more detail in the ending because that part was quite confusing and i had to read it over again.

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  4. laura!!! i get what you are feeling because as you know in the start of the year i was a quiet girl....but now i am myself and i am VERY crazy and LOUD because i don't give a crap about what ppl think.....but the story was deep and amazing!!! mwahh....i luv u LAURITA!!!!!!.... >______<

    ~ani ani

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