Walking down the silent street followed by my five best friends. All of us remembering torturing the biggest nerd in the school.
We were the coolest kids, or as we prefer to be called, "adolescent," in the whole school, but the others called us, Stupid Bastards.
Our fun and only hobbie in school is bullying and beating up kids. That is what we enjoyed the most.
The only thing I remember was walking home with my my five best friends, laughing at the kids from the school that we just beat up. Then I felt an excruciating pain in the back of my, and that's when we woke up in the green lit up room.
Suddenly the TV made a screeching noise, and the beast of my nightmare appeared: a doll with circles on his cheeks, pale white skin, red eyes, and midnight sky hair combed back. Then suddenly the doll's mouth opened and said:"I want to play a game with you. I know you, but you don't know me, I'm Apprentice.
The doll looked reclusive when he talked.
Then suddenly the bright light bulb turned on and burned our eyes.
That's when we realized that we were chained up in the air by both feet and arms.
In front of all of us there was a jar of acid with a key in the bottom, estimating about two liters.
Then the doll started talking again saying:"You have to get the key at the bottom of th jar, and your time is 60 seconds, if you don't make it in those 60 seconds, your rib cage will be permanently ripped out of your body. Your time starts now.
The Tv went back to the screeching noise.
The clicking of the timer reverberated in my ear.
We all tried to look tough, but our tremulous body betrayed us.
My trembling hand went into the acid, which made it burn more and more and more, my hand started dissolving in the acid.
When I finally got the key and unlocked myself from the chains, I fell to the ground clutching my hand, so did Mary, Samantha, and Jaiden.
Then when the timer stopped, blood gushed out from Jason and Jack's body, when their rib cages were permanently ripped apart.
When my friends, Jason and Jack's, rib cages were permanently ripped out I felt the profound pain in my heart.
I was really despondent after the death tragedy of my two friends.
The screeching TV noise turned on again, and Apprentice appeared in the screen and said:"Congatulations! You survived one of the traps, now you will be moving on to the next trap. The next trap is called "The Box." Your head will be in a box filled with water, with no oxygen able for you to breathe. The key is within your body.
Apprentice was laughing affable from the TV.
We all struggled to keep our air inside our lungs.
I entreated god to spare our lives as the water rose higher and higher.
This painful heartbreaking game felt interminable.
As the water rose higher less oxygen was within our lungs.
As I finally cut deep enough, I could put my hand inside my arm, I reached the key and unlocked myself from the breath taking box. I looked over and saw Samantha, Mary, and Jaiden dead in the water.
A door opened and the light gleamed in the whole room, and then Apprentice came riding on his tricicle and said:"Congratulations! You are th only survivor. Are you grateful?"
And he rode the tricicle out of the room and that's when I walked out into daylight.
I quickly confronted the police about Apprentice.
I will never forget the way he amissed us to the games.
His face still haunts me day and night.
Apprentice didn't think this cruelty was an abhor.
He impelled the blade inside my heart when I lost all my friends.
Apprentice was the most irascible person I ever met.
Apprentice's friend Jigsaw, was a sage person, because of what he did to us.
I want to give Apprentice a tirade for what he did to me and my friends, but I realize the punishment he gave us, for what we had done to other kids.
It still hurts, when I think about my lost friends, but now I have learned, what you do to others, will come around and hit you even harder.
Friday, November 13, 2009
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