
What keeps me wring is everything, everything I see, hear, and feel. Writing is a way for me to express myself in any way I want to, my problems, my thoughts, my feelings. When my heart is broken into thousands of pieces, I need to pick all of those individual pieces, by writing I can slowly start picking them up and express myself without telling my parents all those stupid teenage details, they won't understand.
When I write I want to be specific, but I feel some people just don't understand my writing. Every time I write, I want to put deeply felt feelings into my stories, most of the times there is this wall blocking my way from my personal feelings I want to express. It is hard to understand for most of the people that I try to write my feelings to.
When I write, I am scared. I am scared that I will be caught. If I write about my personal feelings, someday I will get in trouble. I wish I could be like everyone else in the world...that don't have to hide their true indentity...some day I know it will be different. Some day I will be a free bird flying high above the blue skies, swaying my free wings through the clouds.
Ever since I got you as a teacher, I felt from day one that I would me more free than I was before...that I would be able to write my true self. I feel that I can actually trust you...most teachers don't understand, and just think your writing is out of mind. That is why I love coming to your class and writing what are my actual feelings, my truth identity. When I write in your class I have more passion in my heart to write, and I know now it's time to break down the wall in my way.
When I write I want to be specific, but I feel some people just don't understand my writing. Every time I write, I want to put deeply felt feelings into my stories, most of the times there is this wall blocking my way from my personal feelings I want to express. It is hard to understand for most of the people that I try to write my feelings to.
When I write, I am scared. I am scared that I will be caught. If I write about my personal feelings, someday I will get in trouble. I wish I could be like everyone else in the world...that don't have to hide their true indentity...some day I know it will be different. Some day I will be a free bird flying high above the blue skies, swaying my free wings through the clouds.
Ever since I got you as a teacher, I felt from day one that I would me more free than I was before...that I would be able to write my true self. I feel that I can actually trust you...most teachers don't understand, and just think your writing is out of mind. That is why I love coming to your class and writing what are my actual feelings, my truth identity. When I write in your class I have more passion in my heart to write, and I know now it's time to break down the wall in my way.

That is what writing is about: revealing that things that yo need to reveal!
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you feel free to write here. I also feel like our class has become a close knit learning community.